There is an interesting ongoing discussion with Graham on Discord.

So I'm editing our announcement with Graham's suggestions:

"Officially announced on May 17th, 2014 and fairly launched 4 days later Slimcoin is one of the few truly decentralized coins around. Whoever wants to join and contribute to its development in any way is welcome. Its Proof-of-Burn (or virtual mining) algorithm, that by the recent estimates provides up to 30% of yearly SLM returns, grants to everybody the possibility to mine coins without any specific hardware and with a minimal computing power employed. It also contributes to a balanced power structure without an almighty elite and to a clean environment for the future generations. The economic model that is behind the Proof-of-Burn mechanism is not within the get-rich-fast logic, but rewards the long-term involvement. So Slimcoin has a potential to shine should the traditional coin’s markets become saturated. Along with a unique mining mechanism, Slimcoin offers the ASICs resistant CPU mining algorithm dcypt and PoS. The community is active on Discord and Bitcointalk."

I'll try to put hyperlinks on first Proof-of-Burn mention and on the words "Discord" and "Bitcointalk" at the end of the text.
If there is any other suggestion please speak now or forever hold your peace as we are already a bit late with delivery and I'd say it's mandatory to send the announcement this weekend.