You should write a shorter version if you want your text to be shared and translated (and read) IMO. I'm sorry but I found it very long for this kind of subject, some arguments are repeated several times in the text.
BTW Why not launching a petition on change.org?
There is no problem having a long post explaining everything about KYC, from its history onto how to a conclusion and prevention to it. Everyone must be patient and this posts was indeed long, yet reading it doesn't made me bored as some arguments did lift the other statements.
Launching a petition on change.org would also be useless. KYC and the risks of Identity theft can be prevented as long as the users are knowledgeable with its harm. Therefore, giving your information in KYC-required platforms is your choice. And signing a petition were far to be successful.