Thanks. If you know someone who would use my services I'll definitely take you up on the proofreading and in the mean time I'll do what i can to improve.
That's some great attitude! As a writer you can overlook some aspects of your writing. This is why reading through your material is important. Usually I like to give myself 24 hours to disassociate from my writing and read it objectively.
On a side note, it would be great to address the elephant in the room and give potential employers an explanation for your negative trust score.