Probably change the music. It sounds too generic, like from those cringey motivational videos.
I agree with this. Changing to a more quiet or mysterious themed music background is ideal if you wanted to create an introduction for your documentary.
In addition from above replies
- I suggest you to avoid writing the world "finally" or any other words after the date. You can just put "In 2008" or "2008" instead.
- @avikz is correct. Try to continue or at least make some short documentary about bitcoin. Creating a full pledge documentary that points out the history of the creation of bitcoin and its blockchain is good to be considered.
The most iconic bitcointalk threads. History on Bitcointalk. Maybe this can help if you are planning to make a full documentary about bitcoin. Choose some topicor threads that may interest you.
Great skills by the way!