Thank you very much for your positive feedback! I do appreciate it, and appreciate the merit 
If you have any further suggestions on how I can improve - I am happy to listen. Thanks again!
If you have any further suggestions on how I can improve - I am happy to listen. Thanks again!
Two good things already you made, those are:
1. You are agreed to use escrow
2. you have added few funds as proof of your fund.
As you are not reputed or higher rank it might be more better if you keep a portion of your fund to an escrow then few borrowers might be interested to take loan from you and also might be interested to send the collateral directly to you.