This is just my personal opinion and Im not a pro like the others but since you have been interested to improve better then I figure that I would let you know some of my opinion 

On 1st qualifier, you have done incredibly well compared with your performance on the 2nd series

On 2nd qualifer, You lose alot of chips early and that makes you seems a little bit desperate to win back your chips which also make it seems like you were kinda predictable. This of course is just my personal opinion

The most persistent and consistent player despite having bad start imo is FOMA. Maybe some others as well but I am on the same table with FOMA most of the time so I know how he play most of the time. You should check on how he usually turn everything back despite having bad start and low chips

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Again, this is just personal opinion though