We hired a 3e party to write our whitepaper. The same person who did the above projects he apparently reused the text from.
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You hired someone who steals content from another project and gives it to inexperienced teams like you. He will not be able to convince a professional team with such deceptive work. So I think your team is very inexperienced and in a hurry to launch the project. I don't know what your motives are, but you can't go far with this kind of unprofessional work.