Dude, I'm sorry but 45 seconds into the review I got the impression you have trouble finishing sentences and tend to mumble.
In addition, the angle of the camera is just plain annoying and there's no way I'm going to waste time watching a video that leaves a sour taste in my mouth in less than a minute. If you can learn to speak with some passion instead of a monotone voice, that would help a lot. Some of the best Youtubers write out everything they're going to say in their videos so as not to waste people's time--because when you do that, people are going to go watch something else faster than you can blink.
Also, there's no way in hell I'm clicking on any TikTok links.