are you writing a novel ?
I don't think you need to go overboard by adding too many paragraphs. Do you think it makes reading people spend 30 minutes of their time just trying to get to the heart of the topic you are creating? I guarantee it only takes 3 minutes, people will be bored with this topic.
I'm sure you don't even understand what you wrote, because if you do, then you can only summarize it into a few clear paragraphs and fiber of meaning.
Hi Sterbens,
Thanks for sharing your idea.
Unfortunately the wrong direction of technology improvement caused to lose our precious abilities which we have obtained through thousands years of evolution. I am talking about ability of
deep working in general, and here
deep studying in particular.
Most probably you are right and too many will not reach to even half of my article. It is what it is. No one is forced to too.
You can dedicate enough time to read it and then debate it or just ignore it. I do not expect every click on article link finished in a serious discussion.
Good luck