This is highly unnecessary. You do not need to rush while reading for you to understand someone, that article is coherently structured. Also, no need to repeat what has been posted by previous posters which I have tried and corrected. If you still insist, is the first
link suggested by ranochigo short for you, or among which you will criticize along.
It is up to you.
This post is the last time I talked about this. I get nothing when I give you my advice. No offence, no attack. Again, as I said, if it is only me, you can say I am attacking you personally but look who gave you advice?
Naturally, people think they are doing the best, before the times they do something better and when they look their past works, they will realize something. My advice is what I learned, from my teachers, lecturers, and textbooks about Writing. If you have yet read any textbook for Writing skills, let's try to read one such book first.