Your post is 936 words long. Nine hundred and thirty six. Do you believe that this encourages us to read it?
This is my opinion, what do you think?
I'm not agreeing with your opinion. If someone ever asked me what's Bitcoin, I'd surely not respond with “It's a database". Rather I'd go with “It's an currency that operates only in the internet”. Then, I'd start being more detailed about it; I'd use common phrases like “no central point of failure”, “borderless”, “limited to 21 million”, “responsibility of money” etc.
Why did you choose that title?