Yeap you can start writing of better things, your writing skill seems fine, but the project you are seeking support.
If you are really into it, you have a options, either showcase your power what you have put into it (words only won't work). Your word though are in nice direction no doubt. But atleast you must understand that timewaster are 99% here. I guess it is better, if you are serious, show some project power. Money is not a problem here for many, but trust is the problem of everyone.