Everything looks good on what you're offering but the price, you mentioned that your fee is affordable plus a discount given to Bitcontalk users, we know the price of the competition for proofreaders for software because it is readily available on the website and on Fiverr they also offer this kind of service and the specific words and price, how will we know how affordable your offer is if you did not mention the price of the service and some specific about your words, do look around here in the service section and you'll see the price attach to the services offered by freelancers here, don't make us guess, post it so we'll get the idea.