I'm sure you had a hard time running through my comment, didn't you? You gave it a try but apart from "giving" which you spotted and replaced with the appropriate "given", the other hyphenated words with two clusters to form a noun aren't issues to be debated. Again, who writes professionally with a comma before a "but" when it's a compound sentence 🤔?

 – I'm not trying to talk down on the services you're offering, but I see beyond spellings and well into verbiage. –