First, congratulations for devoting time and effort to a project like this. Hopefully you get a full version out at some point!
I find the overall concept and the narration style good. I do not know how much of the scenarios was created by you, but they also look quite nice (the meme faces slightly misaligned in some bodies not so, but that is a minor detail). There are a couple of things that I think could be improved, if you are up for some unsolicited feedback:
- I think the game fails to engage you: I watched the 6:29 minutes and I have no idea what I would be supposed to do (just "exploring" is not appealing, that only works if the game is open world and with a massive map).
- For someone who said he does not know about Bitcoin, asking whether he can get it mined or bought for fiat seems incoherent.
- I would also remove references to specific people (talking about Gavin, "Satoshi Nakamoto" is probably fine since we do not know who they were), you never know if they suddenly do something dumb and you are left with an unwanted reference.
- Finally, I do not know if this is some kind of template you are using to develop your game, but the dialogues sound a lot like the ones from Pokémon; it is also possible that you did it on purpose, but I find it a bit cheesy.
Keep up the good work!