Mate  no one loves to read a lengthy  writing like this ..... well maybe not almost but people  still read lengthy  writings that are eye catching  I didn't  even read a paragraph from your post even if it could  have been a quality  one.
It's  your first post  why didn't  you take your time to add a lot of styling to make it attractive  to readers and easier to grab what you're really trying  to pass across without  stressing the readers by having  to read all the whole context .