Hi OP, actually I like reading but reading your writing feels like reading a newspaper. which still highlights important things to be able to know what the author means.
Can it be packaged better and arranged better? You can take important points and use text variations such as lists, font size, bold and so on. or if you have questions, just go straight to the point so that we here can immediately respond well too.
The piece of information ought to be legit and easy running. It's more than newspaper, because it's tiring to even start reading. We know the level of information we're trying to pass in but at the same time, we should just ready ourselves to be stable and involved in the top matter. We can package better, knowing what we want and doing our best to equipped ourselves with good strategies. OP should be inform about the modernized way of transferring information on this forum. I know it's very important for everyone to understand the piece of information but it should be mainly for the general contribution.