It is too long and maybe when you give it to your parents especially they will say one thing "son we are so old and maybe the reading is not suitable for us anymore". Reading something boring now and I would suggest you make a short video that they can listen to rather than make them read. Back to the topic of discussion that humans are new and we will be faced with different era conditions. I agree that the current generation may be much quicker to understand bitcoin, but I doubt that our parents' generation could easily understand it.

But whatever you do, hopefully it will be successful and many people will benefit from reading the writings you make. Introducing bitcoin investment to parents, friends and relatives is not easy because when they do not know bitcoin it will be much harder for them to get involved in it. Bitcoin is quite volatile so it will be a little difficult for them to keep up, unless they understand the basics and the ability that bitcoin is an asset that is able to maintain value.