That's actually an excellent outline and emphasizes some great points, like the identity theft and fraud things.
Edit: I'd like to get my hands on this. Could you send it to me also?
Here is the link to the PPT file. I added more examples of how people can actually use it, and then where to go to get started.
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/52611567/IntrotoBitcoin.pptThat's perfect. Thanks.