Like others have said already, make use of spacing and punctuation appropriately in your write up next time to aid readers and of course, for easier comprehension. I understand no one is actually perfect and English is not our first language but we should try our possible best whenever we are the midst of mix community since it's the most understandable form of communication. By the way, bitcoin is not the safest form of investment as you portray it in your post. In fact, it's one of the riskiest form of investment due to its high volatility. Again, this is not the right time for you to start advising or recommending for anyone, it's the right time for you to get yourself on track learning one thing or another. You can start by improving your vocabulary through the use of modern softwares like "Grammerly" even without a physical tutor. You literally can not be teaching when you need to be taught.