While I can see a lot of hyperbole in this thread, such as the return he is looking to provide I feel it is unfair for you to judge it without reading his documents.
That being said, the length of the document has very little relevance as to the quality of the business/its leaders.
Thank you, this is all I have been trying to say.
You're definitely right though, this particular 40 page document isn't a 5 year olds story as NotLambChop implied, but a very well strategized and presented business plan.
I wish more people on this forum would realize the logic in your point on judging. :/