You say your business plan notes in painstaking detail but your business plan is shockingly incomplete.
I would be interested to know the background of the people founding the company. Also 25% equity is not going to cut the mustard for $250k... Valuing the company at $1m is just absurd as at the minute you have absolutely nothing... according to the report you haven't even developed any software etc...
It doesn't matter how well presented a business plan is, if the underlying figures are so negative.
You emphasise throughout the plan of your huge forecasted figures but these are not at all realistic... $300m in 2018. Come on really...
I would know this because I currently sell domains and I have a large portfolio as well as experience in this sector. Domains are very illiquid. You will not make $1m let alone $300m in my opinion.
Moderate my post at your will but these are the kind of thoughts any potential investor in your business are going to be coming up with.
The equity is not even remotely comparable to the risk.
How much cash have you founders put up yourselves in this project already? Financial proof of this?
So many points to be raised but these are just some of the main ones.
Best of luck with your project.