Ok,


I went back and took out geeky wording and made it shorter.  I also tweaked the format a little.  Thanks for your help Franky1, and thanks for the encouragement Minerpumpkin!  I think it's looking a lot better already!

Here's a link back to the document.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Q6WiJPvmx3FCwgSRAcie9-Ay3Pz54GUhlfTXtVlZDFE/edit?usp=sharing

Also, that's a better idea Franky1:  I'll make it uneditable for the trolls, but you can still make comments on it.  Any revisions or ideas for wording can go in this thread!


Thanks so much,
Matt