Kindly test drive the site that I prepared. This will be my proposed site as our new face for the public. Please PROOFREAD for spelling, grammatical, technical and factual errors.
Send a message to me when you found one.
Then tell me, should we retain the old site, or should we use this new site?
Please be kind with your judgment.
http://easteagle13.wix.com/karmaGreat site.
A few remarks:
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" In this way, Karma acts as a reward system for people and groups to do good things. And, we offer privacy, security, and extremely low transaction fees when giving Karma to others."
Maybe it's better like this:
In this way, Karma acts as a reward system for people and groups to do good things. We offer privacy, security, and extremely low transaction fees when giving Karma to others.
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WHY CHOOSE KARMA needs some padding..
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HOW TO GET KARMA it's way down
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EXCHANGES page
"Exchanges, are market place for digital money like Karma, if you have other kinds of digital money, you may look for an exchange that is accepting it, in exchange for Karma, or exchange your regular money into bitcoin or litecoin before exchanging them to Karma."
Maybe be it's better like this:
Exchanges are marketplaces for digital money like Karma. If you have any other kind of digital money, you may look for an exchange that is trading it in exchange for Karma or exchange your regular money into Bitcoin or Litecoin before exchanging them to Karma.
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KARMA GAMES page
Maybe it would be better to put the games side by side.
6- WHAT IS KARMA page
KARMA TERMS is way down..
Just some observations.
Regards.
Edit: Google Chrome.
Thanks for these, corrected and some that can be adjusted has been adjusted. Page constraint and layout makes it impossible to place the games side by side...try to play a game. Anyway.. Ill be sleeping now..thanks to all.