I understand it's your first coin, so I'll let you know right away what's wrong with it, no one will touch it unless you change the following:

* Premine is too big for a 10 coin reward per block, your premine is 1,212.1 blocks worth.
* You don't mention anything about diff retarget, I take it that this is a straight up litecoin clone, that won't cut it, you need DGW or KGW.

You don't really need fancy graphics, so don't worry about it, just make something that actually works.