. . You had well explained and justified the need for the capital.
But, in what way the investors are going to be getting benefitted.
You are well aware that every such promising IPO/ICO's had lost their monetary value way too low than their initial offering price, within matter of days.
How do you promise the safety of the investors?
Also, we aren't totally aware of the product that you are about to bring, based on the white paper.
Its becoming irrational of asking money for completing the rest 20% of the project.