Not sure you should single out your thesis solely on Bitcoin, making it about crypto currency in general may be a better way to go and give you more options to go at if you come to a stop.
Rethinking money has a nice sound to it, you should expand more into how a crypto currency though can make a massive change to individuals lives in different parts of the world. For example you look at all the Airdrops and bounties different coins give away. A particular airdrop might be say $0.50 worth of that crypto currency, to someone in the US that single airdrop may not go so far by itself, to someone in a different part of the world that one airdrop could go so much further.
Not only is crypto currency a way of rethinking money but it is also creating global opportunity to people who may never have had that option in the past.

Yes we will, they have to pay it out soon as set out in the rules. Hopefully lots of people get a share instead of one big winner

If Jackpot is not won in the next 5 draws it gets split down to the next highest tier!!