Thank you. I would also like to have their opinion, especially Adam Back since I borrowed a lot from his homomorphic value scheme (https://bitcointalk.org/index.php?topic=305791.msg3294618#msg3294618). But every opinion is welcomed, I just want the paper to be reviewed.
Bybitcoin, if you have any doubt you can PM me and will respond ASAP. I know the paper ended up being too "dense". Maybe I should write a "lighter" version?
I am still getting around it, but sure, I will pm you if I find some part of it questionable. Yet it may take me a lot of time and courage to come up with a critique of your model, since I am not a cryptographer, but rather a number theorist. Therefore I hope Adam come on board sooner than later Bybitcoin, if you have any doubt you can PM me and will respond ASAP. I know the paper ended up being too "dense". Maybe I should write a "lighter" version?
About a lighter version, I guess no. You may need a more accessible and lighter presentation of your model for general audience later, when and if your technicalities get approved by the mentioned experts and is ready to be implemented.