I have created my first video for DeepOnion, in fact my first ever video. I mainly create advertising content for social media but wanted to get my feet wet in a bit of video material. So everything is original beside the DeepOnion logo, created in adobe Illustrator and composed in after effects. So I only want feedback, criticism good or bad as this will only give me direction. Its best viewed in fullhd. Thanks
https://youtu.be/X5OioDMQsAoLooks good for your first one.

Want to hear some suggestions?
- Add some music (but dont use music with copyright) or a background music
- add a short intro
- explain a little what DeepOnion is about and how to use it
- add tags to your video so people can find it better
I'd like to add another for the background effect.
If you could make the background be the DeepOnion logo connecting to those nodes, that would be quite awesome background for any video.