I like your explanations but I think you need to change this. Instead of the title, it should be "why Bitcoin price is volatile". Explanation s should also be revised as well. Do not explain why rise happen but rather, try to elaborate why price goes up and down from time to time for others to understand. You might also want to correct the spelling of "Mayner" it should be "Miner".
Thank you for editing. But when I start to find out why the price is sometimes growing and sometimes falls, this is a completely different topic.In this article I would like to explain in general what Bitcoin is. And I brought a couple of examples. I took all this from my head. And the material will look like this, in my opinion, he must make out
Perhaps in the future I will try to write some kind of topic about the growth and fall of Bitcoin.