Quote from: franky1 on August 31, 2018, 02:22:40 AM

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Bitcoin is the digital cryptocurrency and a payment which was invested by satoshi nakamoto and a group of programmers. Bitcoin was introduced in 2008 and later given as a software in the year 2009 .This system runs on a peer to peer connection and there is no involvment of third party. The transaction occurs between sender and the reciever .Transactions are verified by the nodes and the history of all the transactions are available in the public ledger digital called blockchain.

Bitcoin is the first of its kind in the digital cryptocurrency and it has the highest market value in comparison to all other digital crytocurrency.Bitcoins are created as a reward in a competition in which users offer their computing power to verify and record bitcoin transactions into the blockchain. Miners get the bitcoins as the miner and all the transactions history is available in the market.

Bitcoin is a digital cryptocurrency and a payment system which was invented by satoshi nakamoto and a group of programmers. Bitcoin was introduced in 2008 and later given as a software in the year 2009 .This system runs on a peer to peer connection and the transaction occurs between sender and the reciever there is no central corporation managing the funds. .Transactions are verified by the nodes and the history of all the transactions are available in the public ledger digital called blockchain.

Bitcoin is the first of its kind in the digital cryptocurrency. Bitcoins are created as a reward to people with special equipment called ASICS, in a competition in which users who are called miners offer their electric and special ASIC equipment costs to verify and record bitcoin transactions into batches of transactions called blocks. which link previous blocks to the latest block in a chain. hense the entire record of transaction data is called the blockchain.

ok i tried to not obliterate your entire paragraphs. but i hope this helps.
also dont bother mentioning "market cap" as its a meaningless measure which any new ICO can obliterate by making a trillion coin and sell one coin for just a dollar.
so concentrate on its features and benefits. not meaningless numbers that are backed by anything

Thank you very much . I would like to make the necessary changes, ur review is highly appreciated.