Quote from: ranochigo on May 03, 2021, 12:17:12 PM

No offence, the post is actually extremely wordy and some better structuring would be needed.

Quote from: Royse777 on May 03, 2021, 03:42:16 PM

Well it still wordy for me. I read the first few paragraphs with full attention and then just scanned the rest of the paragraphs and trusting that you will not put anything wrong. It will be better if you can simplify it more. I do not think at the current format and wording many people will be interested to finish the entire article.

It is my dear opinion for your style with which you try to sketch your sentence as long as possible. It is unnecessary. If it is only me talk about it, it likely is my biased or distorted opinion but if a few people discussed it with dear intention to help you, it can be a correction for your style.

Take or skip it, it is your decision.

I discussed it with you long time ago and it seems you ignored it and kept trying to sketch your sentence.

Quote from: Charles-Tim on May 03, 2021, 01:00:49 PM

I tried my best to reduce the post contents, but will result to missing of important information for newbies. Just trying to simplify it as it could be.

With same content, the shorter the better. Because the more succinct your sentence is, the more probability that readers will read it all.

In short, there are at least two big problems with your posting style

Sentence is too long. You can make it shorter, always. You think you can not make it shorter, it is not true.
Punctuation, conjunction words

Quote from: tranthidung on March 19, 2021, 12:02:53 PM

Quote from: Charles-Tim on March 19, 2021, 12:21:21 PM

Hope you read what I posted above, I think it is clear how I mentioned 'it depends'.

Your post is very long and I don't read it all. Another minus point in your post is bad punctuations. Frankly said, it is my contribution for your writing. It is not my attack.

I bet that anyone can understand your sentence

Admin recommends the same thing.

Quote from: theymos on September 23, 2018, 08:58:25 PM

When trying to write quality posts, a lot of people act as though they're writing a book report for school: putting facts that we already know into their own words. Nobody wants to read that, and you will not get merit for it. Moreover, the length of your post and the quality of your English are only minor factors. In trying to write a quality post worthy of merit, you should offer new ideas, personal experiences, or perspectives that other forum users will actually find new and interesting.