That may or not be the problem (too many words).  I created a thread not too long ago in which I described my experience spending bitcoin at a place that had never accepted it before.  A few members commented on the length of the OP, so I'm assuming that might be part of your "problem". 

However, I would suggest that instead of writing less that you break up your text so that it doesn't look like a word-brick.  People are much less likely to read your entire post if you don't have some empty space in between long strings of sentences, and I can tell you that personally I don't even have the patience for posts that are just BWoT's.

In the case of your OP in this thread....even though you used line breaks, it's all over the place in terms of content.  You'd be better off making a concise post that boils down the main points you want to make without all the extraneous stuff.  People don't (and won't) read a stream-of-consciousness type of post that doesn't get to the point within the first paragraph.  You've got a lot of good stuff to say and write well, but this forum isn't for literary enthusiasts; it's for bitcoiners who probably have short attention spans (like me).

Good luck, and I wish you the best.