Quote from: icopress on August 04, 2021, 12:12:27 PM

Quote from: RainbowKun on August 04, 2021, 10:18:51 AM

Throughout July, I posted 26 articles with 20,126 words, 8,099 views, 929 responses and 90 merits. It is not easy, I put much effort into it. At the same time, I sincerely thank everybody who read and responded to my work. Your participation made my words more lively. I believe these articles are valuable to everyone.

I congratulate you on such an achievement, but I am inclined to agree with pooya87 that more than half of the text present in your publications is "water". Nothing personal, but if you want to develop, just take note of this, and by the way, I do not remember the verbatim phrase, but this is exactly the case when LoyceV's expression would be most appropriate: “you don’t need to complicate simple things”. Good luck in your endeavors Wink

Quote from: pooya87 on July 12, 2021, 04:41:00 AM

That is because you are rambling. Nobody reads big walls of texts with inconsequential content most of which don't have anything to do with the title specially when that title itself doesn't make any sense. [...] all I'm saying is that you could have expressed your thoughts in a much shorter way. All you have said in the past 4 to 6 topics you have created could have been compressed into a single paragraph or two instead.

Quote from: igehhh on August 04, 2021, 10:48:37 AM

Quote from: RainbowKun on August 04, 2021, 10:18:51 AM

Up to now, I've got 145 merits, 156 posts, and 42 activities. I feel proud of myself. Next, I tend to spend most of my time in the operation of my project, so such intensive creation might be hard to achieve.

Great work Op! But my little unpopular advice to you is that you shouldn't let Merits drives you wide it's dangerous to think about ranking up while writing a good article, every good thing comes with a fair price ^{though bad things always happen to good people} that being said, I love reading your articles but some are too wordy( too long to read Grin

) please try and make it simple and brief ^{this is a forum not blog}.

Keep up!! my eyes on you!!!!

Hello, Igehhh and Icopress, sincerely thank you for your blessings and suggestions. I am also improving myself through various methods. First of all, the main purpose of my writing here is not for merit. I will stick to writing regardless of whether there is merit or not. I list some merit information here to express my gratitude to some friends for supporting me. Secondly, many friends suggested to me the question of the text wall. I have also been thinking about how to optimize this. One is to streamline the content, and the other is to improve the layout. Third, some friends may think that many of my places are verbose, and many words are useless. In fact, in my opinion, every sentence has its own value. What I record belongs to my philosophical thinking, and I record the process of thinking so that people of different cognitive levels can understand them. Of course, you must be interested in these articles. If you are not interested, you may not be able to read a word. In any case, I will write steadily, continue to output, and strive to improve myself.