Mate no one loves to read a lengthy writing like this ..... well maybe not almost but people still read lengthy writings that are eye catching I didn't even read a paragraph from your post even if it could have been a quality one.
It's your first post why didn't you take your time to add a lot of styling to make it attractive to readers and easier to grab what you're really trying to pass across without stressing the readers by having to read all the whole context .
It’s like one piece of block full of letters and words and sentences.
You could have cut it into sections and created headers or headlines or sub-titles for easy navigation. It’s really hard for our eyes to follow and read this whole thing. Appreciate the effort but next time I hope you improve.