i think i like this version the best so far.
Perhaps more definition in the V in "Lovi" and the connection between "a" and "i" in Thai.
Also if the V in the heart was more pronounced where "ya L" joins together.
Sorry for the delay -- here are the changes you've asked for. I also included cleaned up versions of the other two. If picked, you'll receive an AI file of all four, or other vector format of your choice.
