While I can see a lot of hyperbole in this thread, such as the return he is looking to provide I feel it is unfair for you to judge it without reading his documents.
That being said, the length of the document has very little relevance as to the quality of the business/its leaders.
Thank you, this is all I have been trying to say.
You're definitely right though, this particular 40 page document isn't a 5 year olds story as NotLambChop implied, but a very well strategized and presented business plan.
I wish more people on this forum would realize the logic in your point on judging. :/
I'm not personally able to comment on the quality of your business plan however your presentation on here has not been the most professional. I would advise against the use of smiley/un-smiley faces. Also more transparency is needed, such as proof of ownership, proof of identity and you also need to get listed on an exchange like Havelock or CounterParty.