Quote from: mwlarkin1 on July 28, 2014, 07:02:29 AM

Thanks Franky. That's a good point about keeping it open ended. I tried keeping that in mind in the most recent revision.

Here's the link again:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Q6WiJPvmx3FCwgSRAcie9-Ay3Pz54GUhlfTXtVlZDFE/edit?usp=sharing

Thanks

getting better, but there are a million and one ways to write a letter, each with their flaws..

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As a payment method, Bitcoin basically means little to no merchant fees. With Bitcoin, money goes directly from customer to merchant,

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Through automated services like Coinbase and Bitpay, your business can accept Bitcoin as a payment method and promptly exchange it into your local currency with little to no merchant fees.

merchant fee's should be changed to 'service charges'.. because its 'services' like bitpay that charge..

and the bit about money transfers from customer to merchant Huh

if your advertising bitpay then the bitcoin is transferring to bitpay not the merchant.

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As credit card companies spend lots of money keeping our current system secure

change our to their.. as it sounds like credit card company's charge alot to keep our bitcoin secure, especially when you introduced yourself as the bitcoin community..

when i got a spare half our ill dig around for my old letters i sent out or ill write a full letter